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The Baldr Experiment: Chapter 5 – The Story – Part 9
Wounds & Rescue The climb left its mark. Not all at once. Not dramatically. Just enough to realise that pushing the story forward, really pushing it had taken more than I’d noticed at the time. Not just tiredness, but the kind that settles deeper. The sort that makes even good progress feel heavy, and turns momentum into something that needs carrying. The direction was still right. The story still mattered. But continuing without pause would have been careless. Suziedog clock
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Dec 20, 20252 min read


The Baldr Experiment: Chapter 5 – The Story – Part 8
Weathertop With Strider walking beside me, the journey felt steadier. There was direction now and fewer guesses. A sense that the story had a spine, even if the details were still changing. So I did what felt like the obvious next thing. I pushed the story forward. And almost immediately, it pushed back. A scene didn’t land the way I expected. A character choice felt thin under scrutiny. The shape of the story revealed a weak point, not loudly, but enough that it couldn’t be
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Dec 20, 20252 min read


The Baldr Experiment: Chapter 5 – The Story – Part 7
Strider Strider didn’t arrive with instructions. No grand plan. No dramatic entrance. Just a steady presence and a sense of knowing the road a little better than I did. At this stage, the journey is still about shaping the story, the choices, the structure, the direction it might take, not writing anything yet, just learning how to move forward with intent. This wasn’t about handing anything over. The story was still mine. The choices were still mine. But suddenly I was
Rachel Barton
Dec 20, 20251 min read


The Baldr Experiment: Chapter 5 – The Story – Part 6
Bree After the ferry, the pressure lifted. Not completely, but enough to breathe again. Enough to enjoy the process instead of bracing against it. The story stopped chasing me, and for a moment, I let myself relax. As the ideas got a little messier, the laughter crept back in. I stopped gripping the outline so tightly and remembered why this was fun in the first place. Gandalf was still there, the spark, the belief, the reason I started, but he wasn’t standing next to m
Rachel Barton
Dec 20, 20251 min read
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